I had to read poem 11, Snowflakes by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow for school, and then I had to write a poem with the same rhyme scheme. Here it is.
Untitled, by Ken Worth (my pen name)
In the school I need to go,
But there's the bell--no time right now,
Oh man, oh, look it's beginning to snow,
And now I yell, " look, a cow! ",
Running straight back past class,
Finally a free bathroom pass.
Longfellow is nice, but give me Walt Whitman or Robert Frost any day.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, though; especially the clever play on words from the first line, resolved with the last. Certainly, he "needed to go," indeed!
Your friend,
Dom